Reviews for Beebers
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
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I love this piece because I have three cats and I like them a lot. I think your use of the word slumber was a good one. It describes what cats do well. The only thing I didn't like was the last line. I felt like it was kinda boring and expected. More description of the cat or of you might have been better.
Isca chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
This haiku is so gentle; it captures this little precious moment in all of its simplicity so well.
Dante's Disciple chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
Very sweet, I can imagine the little cat purring blissfully right now :)

Nice haiku!
Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
Naww mi pewsk! _

Special kitty - gets a haiku written for it an everything!
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
aaw, that's so cute

i love having cats but only if they've been with me ever since they were young. i can't just love a cat straight away unless i'm the one that nurtured it.
nickyO chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
Warm moment captured.