Reviews for Choir Boy
Heartafire chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
Lovely haiku! Angelic and wistful.

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Louis Denair chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
"as they fad away" I love the tricky fad, gives this a lovely tongue-in-cheek flavor. Because the times- they're changing.
Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
I'll assume you mean 'fade' instead of 'fad'. Beautifully written piece :) I love it.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
Is that last line a typo? Did you mean fade? Fad doesn't seem to make sense there...

I like the piece though. I really like the idea of singing to stars before God. That was a nice description.
nickyO chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
You poem helps me imagine this chaste little figure.