Reviews for Smoke Poets
Kyre Crow chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
Once again, this feeling of throbbing, numb pain. Something the numbness is hiding, hiding the fear of the pain.
Ygg chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
Smoke poets.. such an original idea! Great work once again!
kunoichi-socks chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
Hmm, I liked the simplicity of this but I think I'm lacking some insightc as to what 'smoke poets' means in this piece. However, it was very well done! Nice work!

Kat
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
Interesting. Not sure I completely understand the "smoke poets," but definitely an intriguing concept. This is so sad. I wish I understood it more, because I'm sure I would appreciate it more then. Hmm. Keep writing! :)
Isca chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
"Smoke poets." I feel like that all of the time. A ghost in a world full of 'tangible' beings. No one can "kiss" your dreams or your heart or your mind.
Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
:( This sounds really sad. So beautifully done and heart-wrenching. I love it.
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
no one to love people that are so engrossed in their own dreams, in their own fake worlds

that's what i think you're trying to say

i liked it cause the emotion is sketched out well
nickyO chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
Forgive me if I blunder this interpretation: The poet is in love with a fantasy so no kisses can truly be.
Julius Julius chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
Are you okay? If you'd like to talk, I'm only a private message away.