Reviews for Autophobia
TashaBelle chapter 1 . 7/21/2014
I'm confused. Is this finished? I'm really enjoying it but I can't tell if it's done or not. Doesn't seem over.
Catkac chapter 1 . 4/29/2014
Ah, that last line is kind of confusing. He ran... towards Sam? Away from him? Towards Sam ready to eat him?

By your descriptions I'm guessing there is a zombie virus or something going around?

And does Jake retain his wit or does he become a mindless walking corpse?
D.H. L'Orange chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
Geezus that was not the ending I wanted!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Oh God that was beautiful. I am truly floored. Well done indeed
Bumblebee chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
Is there any point beyond crying? If there is, I've reached it :

I'll just pretend that Jake and Sam somehow turned into vampires, then HEA :')
Regal Coat Woman's Daughter chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
...Wait, Jake got turned into one of them, right?

So is he like, sane still?
Saruhno chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
I cried.
JudasMonster chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Hello, this story is kewl. Cool story bro. But, can someone explain what happened at the end?

Did the dude like run and go infect Sam so they like could be like zombies together forever or something. Or was it like did he like run away? Explain please :/ Ikr, there's like so many likes. I'm usually more eloquent than this :/
Mangatake chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
Wow. Beautiful. Also, very scary. Never read anything so bleak, love it.
Morgue Chan chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Oh my gosh! i can't stop freaking crying TT_TT. . . i mean, i kinda had a feeling it was going to happen but . . . oh my gosh why! any way, it's not often i come across a story that gets me all worked up and emotional. . . you write very well. . . I'm going to go cry some more now . . .
lunasea chapter 1 . 6/16/2011 That's all i can say. Just, i loved it. i love stories like this that are based in times like these and theres still a sliver of love involved...and god did i bawl like a baby at the end. I love it love it love it, you my dear are a genius.
leonleon chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
I keep coming back to this story, to read it again and again. I don't have the words to describe how much I love this. It's perfect (even though I'm terrified of what I believe is a certain zombie apocalypse and try to avoid all zombie-related media and also your ending is so bittersweet). Thank you so much for putting this up!
kazoua chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
There's something really... well, romantic about futility. Yeah. Like, because they can't be together and the world is near ending and Sam isn't even GAY!

But, hahaha. Lemme tell you, I have a set of characters - Sam and Jake - and every time I read stories with those names, the characterization blurs. So, I keep imagining my Sam and my Jake in this situation and it's like... bleh.

Anywho, this story is awesome. Legit. Super sad. For, you know, artistic reasons, it's nice that you didn't give them a happy ending. Full circle and all that whatnot.
sassw14 chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
This is wonderful. I love zombie/end of the world stories and this really is one of the best short stories I've read on the topic published, on web sites or whatever. Great job, thank you for sharing.
sick at heart chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
What an amazing story. Seriously, I had an almost visceral reaction to the ending. It's so beautifully written and the characters are brilliant. This is one of those works I wish I had written myself, it's that good. Everything about it was perfect. After I read it, I immediately went back and reread it.

The ending is awesome, but I'm a little confused about the last line. I feel stupid, but when Jake says something inside him found the strength to stand up and run, I don't really know what that means? Is that something his humanity? Meaning that he turned fully zombie? Or was Jake literally standing up and running? Or did his amazing immune system defeat the virus? Although I doubt that. Knowing me, it's probably something really obvious and I'm digging too deep... It's ok if you don't explain it, but this story is frickin awesome and deserves like a billion reviews.

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