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| kazoua chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
... I'm not too into scifi. So, I don't really get this. But... it's interesting. You know? Like, it's obvious that you're a pretty good writer.
You have this sort of slow kind of writing style, I think, if I had to really label it. Nothing really pops up or appears choppy. It just flows.
And I'm still confused. Can't discern what's happening in the end. Bleghh.
| My Chemical Music Box chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
...I'm not sure how you made the apocalypse so romantic - but wow! XD That was really interesting and your descriptions of time going nuts were suitably mind-boggling despite their simplicity XD Put shortly, I really liked it - great work!
| Hendrik Boom chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
What makes me sad seeing this story here is that it means I'll probably never see it in the Magazine of Fantasy and Science fiction. I like it that much.
| Triizore chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
I love how you use description to bring the scene to life. I find it playing through my mind like a movie instead of text on a screen.
The ending was really intereseting and unexpected, but why is Adam giving Jacob the end of the world?
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| theearthisdoomed chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
Fascinating. It makes me want to know more about what's going on, but a very satisfying little story all the same. Thank you.
| Anna Cate chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
This is beautiful. I love your descriptions. The story feels like it goes on beyond what you've told, it's a complete world. The characters are deep and fascinating. I only had one complaint.
"He shifted on the rickety cot he'd bought at the Goodwill store after Adam lost his fellowship and the faculty agreed it would be best if he take a break from the program for a while."
This sentence is really long and confusing. I think it would be better to give this piece of back story in a couple sentences, maybe a whole paragraph.