Reviews for Bunny: A Hobbledehoy
Suppy chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
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You know, like I said before, I absolutely love your writing style and Bunny's "voice". How he speaks and describes things is in a kind of sarcastic, quirky and . . . well, you know what I mean, but I like it! I can't write like that, my descriptions always end up being emotional and thoughtful and drag out way longer than they should . . .

Anyhow, I hope you get ideas for this story (: I'll attempt to help you if I can, but I don't really know the plot yet XD

BUT YOU JUST CALL ON ME BROTHER

WHEN YOU NEED A HAND

WE ALL NEED SOMEBODY TO LEANN ON~

Good work, hun (:

Lots of love! xoxo

OMNOMNOMNOM
tannyapple chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
youve definetly got good wrtiting ability but i did find bits confusing, but after reading it everything became clearer, it will be intresting to see where the story does go when you do figure it out. and if your open to idea's i think seen as Bunny keeps going on about not having a talent and that like the rest of his family if he excelled at something he never expected he would be good at? the idea sounded way better in my head lol anyway feel free to disgard the idea its one the best lol xx