|Reviews for at the bottom of the ocean, you|
| steffxnie chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Ohh, I really like this! The expressions are really fitting and they explain things that have been on my mind lately well. I like how the first half of the piece is about memories, and the second half is about forgetting (but it seems like the narrative persona doesn't want to), so it progresses nicely.
'I couldn't keep what you meant me to love, so i threw it all away.
There is some hurt in this line, as there was a miscommunication of some sort. The next sentence to the end is my favorite part. Well phrased. :)