Reviews for Train Ride
ygg chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
Oh this is nice! The last line was unexpected and gives the poem a pleasant, almost melancholic mood. Great work!
nickyO chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
Nicely done, love the "one track mind" implication.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
This is wonderful, there is something so romantic about s train. Keep up the goof work.

Much love,