Reviews for A New Start |
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Jevanminx chapter 2 . 9/8/2010 I can totally see him as Puck, suits the character very well. JM |
Erin DJ chapter 2 . 7/31/2010 This is good! PLease update. |
Raised with Fangs chapter 2 . 5/12/2010 haha awesome! enjoying this a lot! I think Imma gunna go upde my profile now, cause i aint got no idea whats on it :) update quickly! |
Garneau chapter 2 . 5/12/2010 Hi, This is a cute story. You write really differently, not that it's a bad thing. However, I did notice you had some issues sticking to the one tense ie. past, present and future. Personally I like the past tense, but it is up to you which one you use. Though I think it would help if you just stuck to one. I also noticed on you're profile you have another story with Emily Sheperd as the main character, are they one in the same? Anyway, I can't wait to see where this goes. It is a fun light hearted read, Garneau. |
LeTalyn chapter 2 . 5/11/2010 :3 M Sexy sexy badass. Yay for reviewing! I really love your writing story! I hope you don't mind that I'm gonna keep saying I can't wait for more, cause I can't! And now I REALLY need to watch Glee! |
AzulFire chapter 2 . 5/11/2010 Aah I love Puck in Glee; he is so smoking! Glee is about to come on in like 12 minutes exactly! hahah I love Glee...Keep writing! |
DELETE THIS ACCOUNT NOW 323402 chapter 2 . 5/11/2010 I LOVE GLEE TOO! damn... puck is way too sexy :D this was really good please PLEASE please update soon :D |
thefrogsareattacking chapter 2 . 5/11/2010 Woo! Good story -D |
chocolaterain chapter 1 . 5/9/2010 Hey! I absolutely love the first chapter! I couldn't stop laughing and giggling. I do find it kinda odd though that Emily gets ticked for seemingly no reason... But then I'm sorta oblivious about things so no worries there :) I was also wondering about the personalities of the characters.I found it a bit odd that Rebecca started shouting at Emily. I know that she would be mad but I would have assumed that she would have been more concerned for Emily. Anyways, I love the story line and can't wait to read the next chapter! |
LeTalyn chapter 1 . 5/8/2010 :3 I love the story! Emily is so funny, and Bec is just great too! Oh and Winston, totally the perfect name! (Yay Rugrats) I really can't wait to read more, you hooked me right away! Update soon please! |
DELETE THIS ACCOUNT NOW 323402 chapter 1 . 5/8/2010 this is really really god :D please update soon :D i love firemen _ |