Reviews for The Immortal Curse
P. Kmet chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
This story really flows quite nicely and I love how you describe the objects your characters interact with and see.

I could feel and imagine the "thick rope" and I could see the "blood dripping on the clean floor".

I love supernatural stories...especially well-made stories like this piece.

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A. Barone chapter 4 . 5/12/2010
Ack! So amazing! _ Jaw-dropping, awe-inspiring, breath-taking amazing actually and I am so psyched that this had a happy ending and that there's another story coming our way! _ Great job!
A. Barone chapter 3 . 5/11/2010
Oh. Oh. Oh. This is getting really good. I had a sneaking suspicion that it was Gallen once Brendan was told what was causing Sarah's current predicament. However, because of the prologue I have a general feeling that Sarah's time is going to practically run out before she's found and I say practically because I know you and you don't do tragic endings... _

So don't leave me hanging girl! Update soon!
A. Barone chapter 2 . 5/9/2010
Oh! Oh! Oh! So good! I loved the different POV's. They were confusing at first and I did have to re-read some of the transitions but boy-totally amazing! And I hope that this story doesn't have a heartbreaking ending...PLEASE tell me that the ending isn't heartbreaking! Oh, and update soon!
A. Barone chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
My, my, my. Things are getting very interesting. I can't WAIT to read what happens next! Update soon please!