Wow. Very capturing. I loved the imagery! I could see what you described clear as day. I'm really crap at analysing poetry so forgive me. But is this about heart-break, possibly at night? About a heart breaking and the blood flowing from it? I apologise profusely if I am wrong. This is such an interesting poem, I want to know what it's about :D Well done!

Excellent! I loved your use of repetition! The poem itself really was, as you said, a random inspiration. :) I loved the overall theme and idea that you were trying to express. I give you a 10 out of 10.