Reviews for Flailing |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story was all kinds of awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was fucking quick as dicks. The summary didn't even match up with the content. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the shortness, and I found this adorable, quick, but adorable. Thanks for writing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG FRANKIE IS THE BOYFRIEND FROM SUNNY MR FINNIGAN lol can't believe I didn't know that when it was obvious |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Frankie :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() fantastic! i didn't realise it was the same guy as your other story, lol :L |
![]() ![]() ![]() SUNNY MR. FINNIGAN REFERENCE!did i spell reference right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWW! LOVEED IT! SPecially Frankie. I love him the most! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LoL. So funny. You ended with them saying they get laid and then they high-fiving. Hilarious. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() the conversation is really good. maybe write in some scenery and feelings, whats going on etc to give it more of an dept. the story is really cutting trought the bulshit, i like it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The words I got for that recaptcha thing when you log in? 'gayness making' Fitting, yes? :D The ending was certainly abrupt. I expected it to be a few chapters longer, but oh well. I loved Tyson's 'Jitterbug' line, so epic. And I liked Fitchie's snark and social awkwardness as well. Good story :) |
![]() ![]() Aw, this story is so cute. I love it. :) Good work! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Jitterbug?" he suggested. "Wake me up before you go-go." ...and it turned out to be "let's get it on" ha ha ha your song choices were very well picked and added good comedy. i loved the story :)good job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahahaha hilarious. When Fitchie was like "Let's get it on!" I cracked up. I love how socially awkward she is. ] |