Reviews for I watch her move in elliptical patterns
autumn-spirit chapter 2 . 6/5/2011
I'm seriously scrambling for things to say after reading this. It's like everything people think secretly and in their souls, you bring to light. Your writing is just that unique and sensational.
Oboe.Chica chapter 3 . 10/16/2010
This expresses so well what I think all of us feels at least a little bit :-)
a silenced revolution chapter 3 . 7/3/2010
"as much as life seems to drown in its petty horror, there will always be a new day, a new experience, and it won't always be like this"

this is so, so very true. it hits home with me.

i like this chapter most of all.

A/N: fo sho! ;)
a silenced revolution chapter 2 . 7/3/2010
ouch. unrequited, clandestine feelings are painful, yet the longing can be a sort of aneasthetic to the knowledge that it can't ever be real.

if that makes sense.

again, you capture it perfectly.
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
it does, i agree. well described.
steffxnie chapter 3 . 5/29/2010
There's so much emotion in this piece. 'I just hide in my skin and wish they would see through.' I like this line.

The ending is good too. Simple and well expressed. I really like it. :)
a certain slant of light chapter 3 . 5/26/2010
this is...again, i relate to it a lot, but as you put it, the fictionizing of it, is fantastic. the whole piece is absolutely love, but the last line really blew me away.
a certain slant of light chapter 2 . 5/26/2010
i relate to this so much. i like "dim room" and "taking advantage of your innocence." lovely.