|Reviews for What am I?|
| Meng En chapter 1 . 2/11
Intentional anaphora parallels, interesting antithesis contrasts, and brilliant style when inserting your apposition. I would only wish you'd end the poem with a tone of gravity or pensiveness due to the said tone the readers would acquire when reading your poem, but it may be intentional. I felt like your poem is a personification of life's metabasis, if that makes any sense. Other than that, I really did enjoy your usage of syntax and style. Most of all, it helped stimulate my mind to care about my past and the future, which I think is the most greatest thing a poet can do: make someone care.
| Chloeeh Chaos chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
Wow. That's really inspiring. It reminds me of the song, Where are you now by Honor Society. You should listen to it :D