Reviews for The Lily
AvidWriter-92 chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
hey, mandyla. :)

I liked this poem. It was short but sweet. I thought that it was rather calming, and I liked how you incorporated the changing of seasons into it. :)

I also liked the way that you broke up the lines. It made a cool rhythm when I read it. :)

The personification of the flower feeling sad was a nice touch as well, and it made me feel connected to the piece. :D

Avid, via the RH/Gossip. Repaid your review from awhile back. Sorry it took this long! :3
Ms.Sweet Pea chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
great poem. you turned a lily.. a flower into something so nicely played out in words. can you return the favour and review anything i've written recently? thanks!