Reviews for All The Broken Dreams |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Was told to read this as a joke, so I did just annoy my friend. And I am glad I did. Great story man! I can not say more without sounding redundant, just wow man! Nice work! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wa! This story was soooo good! And I really loved Abril, BTW:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwww this is soooo sweet! Can you do a part 2 of this? Pleaseeeee! Soo nice! |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE UPDATE |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm just glad to see your still posting chapters. I love this story! My heart was beating pretty fast at points. I really get into good stories, and yours is well enough written that I get sucked in, and at the end of each chapter its a shock to be kicked out of the vibrant world you create. I love your characters. I'm not sure if I've said this, but they are so perfect in their imperfections. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry for taking so long to review. Was ist das? Das ist ein cliff hanger! (what is that? that is a cliff hanger! That is me failing at german!) I used German to make sure the point stood out, when you leave a cliff hanger, you should quickly post the next chapter. I know as an author cliff hangers are fun. but as a reader unable to read the next chapter they are amazing and extremely frustrating for an over active imagination. I can't wait to read the next chapter, and I did enjoy this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting... |
![]() ![]() ![]() happy late birthday. the chapters are amazing. keep updating. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry it took me so long to review. I love this story, and I read it the day you posted. Everything is starting to get exciting, and I can't wait to see what you do with this original story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have a very happy birthday! I'm a new reader, I enjoy the story so far and looking forward to more :) Have a great day, full of presents and inspiration! ;) |
![]() ![]() I loved it I'm do addicted now ! please update as fast as you can |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this chapter. It explained a lot to the reader without being an info dump. It also leaves me anxiously awaiting the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() OMG IM INLOVE WITH IT! PLEEEEASE UPDATE AS FAST AS YOU CAN! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please please please please write more! DDDDDDDD: I'm dying to know what happened! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() really good story. is abril thinking about becoming a soul eater? |