Reviews for Flying High
HiddenFromYou chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
The a/n seemed a little... out of touch with the poem, while trying to lead on from it. It makes it sound like the narrator doesn't really care that she could be causing herself pain, that she view it as unimportant. I don't think that was the view you were trying to put across.

The real poem, however, brings across the feeling very well. :)