Reviews for Two feet in Lake Washington
Isca chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
"Toes taste sand." I love your use of the word 'taste' here and the personification of toes; brilliant! :)
Julius Julius chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
People and poets describe emotions in all bodily aspects except for the feet, or I feel if the feet are introduced into a poem, they must be handicapped with some other body part. It implies that they are more pure, genuine, sexier, whatever. But you alter that paradigm completely and give the feet their own emotional background, story, and place a firm emotional gift in them. I love it!

By the way I replied to your private message, but not sure you got it.

Later gater,

- J
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
I love the personification of toes. The idea of them tasting sand is such a great description. I also like how the piece is about the feet and not the person the feet belong to, it's different. The only thing is it seemed odd to split up Lake Washington. It just seemed forced for the syllable count.

Haven't seen you in the Review Marathon in awhile! (link in my profile)
savor those enticing dreams chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
i absolutely adore the imagery.

it brought to mind countless summer sensations.

well written.
nickyO chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
Oh I really want to go to the beach now.
Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
:) That's a cute little one. I love it