AW DEH POOR BABY. I give hugs? *back to normal english*

I'm looking forward to the rest of this. I love Ashlyn.

I really am enjoying this so far, and it's nice to read slash where the author develops both male and female characters. Their friendship seems to be strong, and well developed an that is always a good thing in my book. If you still are having problems finding a beta I would be interested, I have done a very little on the fan fiction side, so drop me a line if you still need help. Good writers are hard to find, and I like to encourage the ones I spot.