Alright, so far I'm loving the characters, loving the dialogue, loving Aaron. Now moving on to the next chapter...

I love this story so much! Please update soon!

I feel so bad for Mace :( I just can't wait to keep reading.

So many feelings in this chapter.

Can't imagine the hell thats about to break loose with the genies (100 of them, oh god).

However one thing came to mind at the end: Get that baby(the unborn son) the hell away from Addison. Kid has no idea what he's being born into. And Addison will just hate the kid for representing what he lost.

I'm still reading :).

I really like you style of writting and how you convey Aaron and Mace's feelings. I love how you made their relationship. I'd be very very happy if you finished this (sad as well because there wouldn't be anything more to read but happy nonetheless :D)

By the way, I'm french, sorry if I said something you didn't understand above .

I'm waiting for the next chapter ! (& thinking of reading everything from the start again ;)!)

Hi Whitefield,

This is going great. I loved this chapter.

I think the story needed some sort of antagonism to develop a bit more.

The thing with the genies, I hope you're not thinking of making Aaron become human.

Mason is a creature of history and he likes history and learning how the world developed through his classes with Jay, so I think that he would like to become a god with Aaron.

Aaron said that he sometimes hated being immortal, but that was because he was alone and skeptic of everything. But Mace is healing his heart so I guess he will be happier now. Besides, he wants to be able to protect Mace, and being a god helps him do so.

There is something on my mind about the genies.

Since now they know about Aaron, they are going to demand they become human, because when they found out about Jay, all of them were adamant to have something happen to them too.

And on Friday of Magic, it was mentioned that one of the genies was a child. Was it another mistake too, or was that child really bad that she was made a genie?

I hope your laptop was found, because it sucks to have it gone.

Good luck with everything.

Hugs,

P.

I love this story. Please tell me there's more coming soon.

Zoomed through everything in 2 days and I loved it :D

Does Mace's pet name mean silk? Sichou is silk in Chinese (:

This is so nicely written and the plot is lovely. I've spend the past four hours reading the whole thing.

Fantabulous! Can't wait for the next installments : )

I love these guys.

Oh man am I happy. I love when good stories intertwine. _ I was scrolling through your stories for more to read, and even though I normally try to hold off until they're complete (and then read them all in one go), I wanted to start this one, hoping that "Mace" would be the Mason Fatts we saw talking to Professor Jay. _

Loved the story. It's better than some of the stories on here in my opinion keep up the good work!

I'm curious if yer gonna do a story for Rene, or is this the last of the saga?

Awesome! update soon!

Hell yeah Matt. I'm so glad I'm a man too.

Can I keep one of the babies? Please? Pleease? ;P