Reviews for In the Amber Light |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() Truly loved this! |
![]() ![]() Lol this is like a crazy sweet love story |
![]() ![]() ![]() No kiss? but i am truely in love with this story ! |
![]() ![]() THIS STORY WAS AMAZING! I really really liked the way you hinted at Elijah's Christianity like it was normal, which is rare here. Also, you're descriptions were lovely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love this :) The characters, the friendship/romance and the photography all make this a great story to me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very sweet. Lovely short story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finding a camera with film like that one (the soldier story) would be better than finding buried treasure. What amazing stories could be told. A very nice one-shot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahah that was omg great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww that was adorable. Their characterizations were great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nawww so much love for these two! And all the photography! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome "escaping into the sunset" ending I could feel the strands of amber light in your story. Well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww! So freaking cute! Eek! Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow just so LIVELY bang on job its crazy nd freaking awesum ..NO WORDS totally in love wid d stry (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was definitely one of the better one shots I've read. :) There were a couple of typos here and there (sorry I didn't keep track of them while reading! I know sometimes that's helpful for editing purposes), but I liked the story a lot; the premise was simple but believable and really well-executed. The characters were SO loveable; I especially loved Elijah, just his sweet, good-natured way of approaching things, and even expressing things (I so prefer his "married people shenanigans" to the various and often vulgar ways characters, especially teenagers, refer to sex). But unlike some stories or movies where the guy is so amazing and the girl is an absolute jerk and you wonder why the guy is so crazy about her, your story's female lead was quite likeable, too. Plus, I'm interested in photography and have always wished to learn how to develop film (sidenote: LOVE your pen name). What's not to love? Thank you for a quality read :) |