Uhh not to be rude but, in the last chapter or so you had luke lie to river saying that cam found out about their relationship, (also another thing was that river was upset that cam found out and was worried he would tell someone after river himself had already told chase) which now is brought up but wouldn't river realize that Luke lied to him when cam started yelling about not knowing? Also, chase must be a super good friend to be uber mad at river and yet not tell people about him and like with how rumor happy this school is. I mean I haven't read the whole thing yet but, I'm a little confused...besides this, it's a good story

AWW! I loved it 3

OH DAMN! hahaha poor River! D:

I liked the chapter! Can't wait to read more, but homework awaits!

okay so usually i post at every chapter but ive decided to post at the end noe and lemme tell you... I FRIGGIN LOVED THIS! when i get really into a story i have to brace my self for the embarassing parts and ohemgee i was squealing like a fan girl lol well anyhoo, im on mobile so im probably not signed in but im ThatChickMelanie thanks for the AMAZING read!

I enjoyed this story pretty well. I thought the side-characters were a little two-dimensional, though. Sometimes their motivations were hard to comprehend. But it held my interest all the way through.

Lol. I have the feeling that Ms. Snow is a bit crazy herself. All 3 bottles of medicine...? Yeah. Self prescribing much? Hmmm. Ms. Snow Luke's faghag? So funny :S

Oh River... How could you? Obviously Tyler is exactly like what Ms. Snow encountered in her own experience, a "scheming little slut"... I want Luke to move on to Chase or Cammy, but that isn't possible since their characters are already developed too far to have a non platonic relationship with him. I wouldn't necessarily want Tyler to die but... Kill him off :) Ehh. River better redeem himself adequately...

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG this was epic plz plz plz make some one-shots and a sequal ty and dean i loveded it piggy I Loveded it

*Finished* Wewt~

Hmm... I wonder if I did it all in one day or if it took me two? Anyway, LOVE it.

I'm happy with the ending. If you were going to make a sequal... CAMMY AND CHASE! So adorable~ w

RARGH! I WAS GOING TO WAIT TO THE END OF THE STORY, BUT I NEED TO COMPLAIN NOW, WHAT THE FUCK, DUDE?

*punches everyone and everything. snarls ferociously. throws the couch out the window. rips Ty's throat out. Scratches River's eyes out and castrates him with a rusty butter knife*

FUCK YOU! DAMN IT!

*collects herself*

Okay. Well, first of all, I am into the characters, so much so that I am getting seriously pissed right now. I don't know if that's a good thing, or a bad thing right now. I mean, it's TOO FUCKING REAL that someone is bound to cheat on their boyfriend/girlfriend, but FUCK! Why does it have to go this far? Why does Luke still want to be with the bitchassmotherfucker? Seriously! WHY? I would have wanted to punch him in the nuts (except I wouldn't, then I would walk away, punch something else, then act like I didn't know him the next day and carry on like we never dated in the first place.) Motherfucker. I hope he drowns in a river (pun)

Okay, just so you know, I'm totally into your story. I know I haven't commented earlier, but I just didn't want to stop reading long enough. .

The writing isn't professional, although at times I really like you style, but I'm still so warped into your characters and how this story is fitting together. It's really good. :3

Its already over? I feel sad now. It was a good story :)

ALL HAIL LUCE-JUICE! Lol I loved the ending, even if there wasnt much fluff. But im so happy i ever started reading this story. DO A ONESHOT ABOUT CHASE & CAMMY'S FIRST DATE! Not to sound pushy or anything lol :D

Its been so much fun! Whenever I catch a story at the very beginning I tend to baby it all the way through. like a godparent! Ooh can I be the godparent of the story? xD I'd like a Dean story, but definitely not involving tylerskank. I also like the idea of a Chase/Cammy sequel. So I'm definitely all for a Dean/Chase/Cammy sequel and/or oneshot. Aw...dont worry, my imagination will fill in the sexy time... And don't think you've gotten rid of me yet! to your new story I go! xD

much love and a final farewell on this story~

PGK