Reviews for This River Is Wild |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I think that you should write all three! :) and if you do can you maybe put the 1st chapter at the end of this one so that we know if/when the next story will start. -midnightwrighter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Despite the fact that River was an ass, I'm happy he and Luke are back together. I only hope River will treat Luke like he deserves. What about Ty? I don't imagine he's giving up so easily and he put a major wrench in things before. I can only hope River and Luke will live happily ever after without a third party interfering from here on out. :D Thanks for the great read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() SEXY TIME! SEXY TIME! SEXY TIME! Hey, I think you should put in some..uhh...sexxy timme :D Give the ending a nice fluff. I love you ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have a shallow feeling inside. Probably because the part of me that wanted Dean around for good is in a corner crying. But yay! sexy times is always good. and 39/40 chapters is a nice amount. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() You anger me lol jk. Really god chapter. please make luke and river get back together! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I wonder if Luke will forgive him. I'm torn about whether or not I think he should. On one hand, River really was an ass. On the other hand, I think Luke really loves him. Tough decision! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You sly dog, you. If you agree with me, then make Luke agree mwith me! Sheesh. Lol I like the fact that he's wearing a backless hospital gown while sneaking out of his room. It gives the term rebel a whole new meaning ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() *rolls around in grass* idk what to say today! D: um um um um did you switch the doctor's name halfway through from Tenant (or something) to Goddard? or did I miss/skip something? oh and the one female in the story sucks? really? xD |
![]() ![]() Omg. Blasphemy! She was crazy! I didn't even know! Insanity! Update soon.. Again lol! |
![]() ![]() ![]() He Should end up with river! River is an awesome boyfriend if you forget about Ty even if i do kinda like his character. Have dean and Ty get togetjer instead. ! Update soon! -midnightwrighter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Luke's head feels floaty lmao Dean was just a casual fuck. River is the love of his life. Does that answer your question? lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very important question indeed... Dean? Or River? I haven't read Dean that much to understand his character developement and if he's good enough for Luke and on the other hand, River left Luke for a messed up reason so why should he deserve him? I would probably have to say Dean though. But i'm still kind of unsure. Lol. Awesome chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i absolutely love this story...but i have to say Rivey he might be an ass sometimes but i just love him and luck together |
![]() ![]() ![]() UH, RIVER! DUH! ARE YOU INSANE! You can NEVER EVER! Change the pairing in a story to a new character. You will have lotss of people revolting against thatt l: But cheahh. I like this chapter because River finally realized that he's bein' a douchee. FINALLY. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm well you pose a difficult question. Lukey has more history with River. And River likes him, but I totally don't want to leave Lukey with that douchebag. Dean seems nice...I guess. The last chapter gave a bit more depth to his character which leads me to thinking he's got potential. I'd very much like to see Dean as . But I wouldn't feel comfortable with him unless there were like twenty more chapters, you know, with real meaning behind Dean/Luke's relationship (including a river/dean alpha male fight over the female-beta male in this case- rofl). So if you want to finish this quickly (you've gotten to a good size of 35 chapters), I would suggest a return of the River/Luke couple, with a cute little ending of love forever after. The end to this really long rant. p.s. rofl "do you know where my pillies are? they tated nice." xD |