Reviews for This River Is Wild
AlphaBeatKayGee chapter 19 . 7/9/2010
Ohh man. Luke. Well, this had to happen anyway! So hopefully the next chapter comes soon! Until then
BlueMoonlily chapter 18 . 7/5/2010
hmm you missed up a little and said Jamie from your other story instead of luke but you can go and fix that later ;) lol great job you're getting better! that must have been embarrassing to write but it wont be the more you write slash...hopefully thats an upside for you! lol loved the chappy
BlueMoonlily chapter 17 . 7/5/2010
i would never kill you then i wouldnt know what happens next! hehe looking forward to read the next chappy ;)
Sky Quinn chapter 18 . 7/5/2010
im glad you're still keeping up with this story.i think you made a mistake and put river's name as jamie, im not sure. whats going to happen in the story? seems like something bad?
AlphaBeatKayGee chapter 17 . 7/4/2010
Intereessttingg! I need to know what happens next! They're cute and I really fear for Luke.. But update soon!
FallenFey chapter 17 . 7/4/2010
I really like what is going on in this story! please let us have the next chapter!
lockedxup chapter 17 . 7/2/2010
o3o stuff happening! I love this, keep going! or I will find you. jk. Just keep up the awesome! .
Poptart Guava King chapter 17 . 7/2/2010
tehehehehehe. that 'starving himself' bit is starting to annoy me. :/
BlueMoonlily chapter 16 . 6/29/2010
i LOVE the new chapter lengths long chapters always make me happy hehe:D

fuck river is messed up he needs to go to the hospital jeez I WANT SOMETHING GOOD TO HAPPEN SO IM REVIEWING! im also reviewing because YOU DESERVE IT! *hearts* you're so awesomesauce its unbelievable! lol
BlueMoonlily chapter 15 . 6/27/2010
hmm i think it was good but i think luke should have told cammy ahead of time so then they werent fighting but then again they werent really talking or anything so thats kinda understandable i just hope that they can be friends again and work everything out

good chapter as always :)
Poptart Guava King chapter 15 . 6/27/2010
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG *spazzez out* Chase has it so bad for River *sigh* poor guy...can I have him? xD jk
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooope chapter 14 . 6/23/2010
.this. :D
midnightwrighter chapter 9 . 6/22/2010
Hi.

I cant tell if you meant to put saw in the sentence or sore: I put my hand to my neck automatically, wincing when it brushed against a saw spot.

I love your story. :)
midnightwrighter chapter 8 . 6/22/2010
HI!

This sentence dosen't make much sense to me: 'why do you even care anyway? It's not Luke we even like each other anyway. I mean, why are you even here?'"

I also have no idea how to really fix it. I just thought i would point it out to you.

I am now going to finish reading this story. Which is awesome by the way. :)
midnightwrighter chapter 7 . 6/22/2010
HI :) !

You said: And where he had a massive, comfy looking bed, i had a teensy little bed that hardly fit me on it"

It would sound better if you said -I had a teensy little bed that i hardly fit on. Or something like that.

I really like the story so far so I'm going to keep reading it.
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