|Reviews for failure|
| punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
"you're dying inside, and no it's not because you inhale cancer,/ it's because you exhale false promises and believe in yourself tomorrow, not today."
god, that line is incredible.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
The only thing
Running through my mind
Is the vision of
A sleek, shiny 30 caliber
Straight through my head,
My mind finally free on the wall behind me
that's all I want to feel
your trigger finger posed
no index shit
that's all you can give me anymore
| shutterbaby chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
Thank you for reminding me that I really should be believing in myself today, not tomorrow.
| nevermore199 chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
That's all I can really say.
| a certain slant of light chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
I relate to this so much. I procrastinate like you wouldn't believe, and it's slowly but surely destroying me. This is lovely, I like the repeat of "tomorrow, tomorrow, tomorrow" (reminds me of Shakespeare) and oh, "believe in yourself tomorrow, not today." Simply lovely. :)