Reviews for failure
punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
"you're dying inside, and no it's not because you inhale cancer,/ it's because you exhale false promises and believe in yourself tomorrow, not today."

god, that line is incredible.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
The only thing

Running through my mind

Is the vision of

A sleek, shiny 30 caliber

Straight through my head,

My mind finally free on the wall behind me

that's all I want to feel

your trigger finger posed

no index shit

squeeze it

pull it

end it

that's all you can give me anymore
shutterbaby chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
Thank you for reminding me that I really should be believing in myself today, not tomorrow.
nevermore199 chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
Wow.

That's all I can really say.
a certain slant of light chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
I relate to this so much. I procrastinate like you wouldn't believe, and it's slowly but surely destroying me. This is lovely, I like the repeat of "tomorrow, tomorrow, tomorrow" (reminds me of Shakespeare) and oh, "believe in yourself tomorrow, not today." Simply lovely. :)