Reviews for The Motorcycle
HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiC chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
Oh man you did a great job with it! As soon as I saw the title and the summary I knew it was gunna be based on the little free verse poem from my inbox. Congratulations by the way because you really managed to capture the essence of the male lead and I absolutely love how you manipulated it to be a part of his nature. Honestly, fantastic job!

One thing though, the ending where he mentions the motorbike and how it wasn't too busted up, what is the message behind that?
balloonfista chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
Oh My God, that was heart-breaking...I knew there was a reason why he made her put on the helmetbut I didn't imagine this :(

Ri
Too Much Info chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
I saw the title 'The Motorcycle' and knew immediately someone made a spin-off one-shot from that heart-felt story.

Great work :)
White Rose Blossom chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
I love the way this story was framed. So powerful. Such emotion without really having to put it in there. Amazing job!

-Aria
xxcubanangelxx chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
I really like the story it seems really sweet, although I'm not sure, did he survive at the end?
SpasticLittleGirl chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
Ok so I can't see the screen right now because of these tears. So I'm just gonna hope my typing isn't that retarded,

Everytime I hear this story I cry. I'm serious. And this made me cry even more, because it's a longer version. It's soo soo sweet :)

Awesome job on this!
justlikekindergarten chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
this did sound familiar. i remember reading a story so similar in the hsm fandom. so this was a real story? so inspiring.
Katchiri Black chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
I love this story, your version of it and the version my cousin told me a few years back. This was very beautifully written,and I hope to come across more of your work.

sincerely,

Tem
Karma-is-beast chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
I know for sure that I've seen this on many fanfiction profiles and stuff, but I can honestly say I could read this over and over again compared to the other. I kind of wish I had never read it then because I already knew the plot line and well... it just wasn't the same. Although, I will somewhat admit, it was very touching the way you wrote it. It seemed personal and totally believable. This was certainly a marvelous piece of work :).

With that being said, I absolutely loved how you described the man in this story. He sounded realistic and truly like a selfless man in love. Irony played a beautiful part in the end - what a wonderful twist. I think I would have slapped the doctor and then bawled my eyes out if he said such a thing like that to me...

- Beast
castiel89 chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
I've received that forward email numerous times, and each time I have been on the verge of crying. Your twist managed to give me the same effect :)
dream-beautiful chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
i've heard this chain letter only once but i loved it.