|Reviews for Invisible Man|
| WriterOnTheMove chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
wow...i wish i could leave it at that because i'm afraid my words will only ruin this poem...but i'll say something anyways.
This poem moved me in so many ways. It made me want to cry, because you displayed the pain of this 'invisible man' so well, it made me angry because of the way this women, his lover, would not see someone who loves her, but only notice the one who didn't.
my favourite lines, "I have only served to entertain you while you wait for better
Just your clown of the moment, lost in my own foolishness
Naively thinking that you actually desired my company."
These lines...so true, in so many ways...like having someone call numbers, and each number belongs to another man, each fawning man waiting to get his turn to satisfy this one women...atleast that's how i see it.
Alright, i'm going to stop rambling.
probably one of my top ones
Keep on writing
| felixlee14 chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
That feeling is just so intense and heartbreaking...