Reviews for Ventures and Investments
Evil And Proud chapter 16 . 12/11/2012
wow i feel overwhelmed about Tony and Justin. I hate Justin for what he did to Tony but at the same time I hate Tony for what he is doing to Justin. So you see the problem here

Tony was so sweet before and now he's so wicked. really creepy which is why I love this story though I am dreading that this story is going to end with an unhappy ending. I loathe unhappy endings.

If you were to make Tony and Justin end up together of course it would take a few chapters because Tony has to prove he's no longer this wicked b*stard and Justin has to learn to stand up for himself.

I hope you update soon.
Jill chapter 16 . 12/9/2012
So intense! My gosh, I'm so hooked! Cannot tell what side I am on...hopefully there will be a new chapter soon, dying to read more.
wistfulwabbit chapter 16 . 12/6/2012
Everytime I reread this, I never fail to squirm uncomfortably at Justin's sleaziness. He's just so desperate and self-destructive... And Tony is just as desperate and so cutthroat... They're both so fallible and just so human...

God, I LOVE this story! Please continue writing! I can't wait to see what happens next!
CreativeChick233 chapter 16 . 11/11/2012
I read this story in one day, and fell in love :). I really want to see how you end this story, and I hope you haven't forgotten about it!
FriedaF chapter 15 . 11/7/2012
Im on Chapter 15 and am starting to really wish justin would grow a pair already! Im getting tired of the 'I'm an awful person manipulated and abused by other awful people' routine. Don't get me wrong, the writing is great and i can see the characters humanity/goodness, but i need some closure! I think Tony and Justins' relationship is beyond redemption, and they need to let each other go. Talk about toxic! If this vicious cycle of pain and aggression continue much longer i am going to to give up on this story. I love all of roughdraftheros' other works so i hate to admit my frustration. Please Give me Closure!
K chapter 16 . 10/15/2012
Oh my. I have this love/hate thing going on with Justin. There were so many points where I thought, "Okay, his character it's redeeming itself... He's not so bad." Then he'd say something really messed up to Tony and I would hate him all over again.
I anxiously await the updates to all of your stories, especially this one. Your writing skills are among the group of best I've seen on here.
Dead Fridays chapter 16 . 10/4/2012
I should have reviewed earlier. I love this story. All your stories, as a matter of fact. The funny thing is that whenever I approach one of your stories by first reading your story summaries, they always sound so underwhelming on their own...until I actually start to read the story and see that with the way you craft the plot and storyline, you pretty much exceed my expectations as a reader every time.

Back to this story, I love Justin's character. He started off just swarmy enough but there was always that level of insecurity and a complex character underneath that made him likeable and that pushed the story forward. I'm curious how things will wrap up with Chris. I thought it was a cute character-I feel like he would have been great to Justin, relationship-wise. Not as intense as Tony, but he would have treated him right too.

You say the story's nearing the end? Well, I'm looking forward to it. Congrats on a great, almost finished story.
BIG FAN chapter 16 . 9/15/2012
Oh my gosh! I keep reading this story over and over! I completely adore this. PLEASE FINISH. D: I need a new chapter. Tony sure is...interesting. Justin needs to open his eyes. Seriously. T_T
Soraya Zeeva chapter 16 . 9/2/2012
I feel like that's been a long time coming, their fight/argument, whatever you want to call it. I know Justin is too scared, but sometimes I feel like he should just run for it. And if he does I always wonder if and how far Tony would chase him down.
Originally Pristine chapter 16 . 8/25/2012
Correct me if I'm wrong, but Justin still has that fifty grand that was given to him, I think. He could maybe still make clever use of that.
ninjagrl chapter 16 . 8/23/2012
cool story
spoonring chapter 16 . 8/23/2012
yikes! what a mess they are.
Mara chapter 16 . 8/19/2012
Lol I keep getting scared Justin is going to kill himself or something. I mean all this crap that's happened to him, he seems pretty strong. Also stalker published in feb! So far away T_T but I am excited for you!
SassyGrl chapter 16 . 8/19/2012
Great job !:) its sad to hear that it will end soon! Still my fave story from ya though! Please update asap!
chao-lane chapter 16 . 8/19/2012
This is not going to be a really original review but... god! I love this story! I think it ranks in my favorite story of all time's top five! So much drama and a real thought through plot! I really don't want it to end already!
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