Reviews for Ventures and Investments
chibikodo chapter 18 . 6/15/2013
Wow Tony what a manipulator you are! Obviously Justin has no idea what he wants from life but it defintely seems like he's clinging to Tony because Tony's there for him. Not sure if I think their relationship is twisted or just messed up. Haha Not that it's a bad thing.
Anon chapter 18 . 6/15/2013
Yaay excited for the end!
marginal-utility chapter 18 . 6/15/2013
Psycho Tony is a lot better than Nice Tony lol
cheesekun chapter 18 . 6/14/2013
So glad Justin finally realized what he wanted and went for it (as per Vincent’s sage advice)! In spite of Tony’s scheming, I think these two are perfect for each other! Tony’s so dedicated and Justin deserves to be loved. Thanks so much for the great chapter! Can’t wait to see how this’ll end (but desperately hoping the boys will stay together). Any thoughts on whether you’ll publish this one when finished?
HIVENET chapter 18 . 6/14/2013
possessive Tony is okay as long as he isn't violent...
I mean, if I were Justin, I would have either killed myself already or... Killed myself already. Shit, man.
SassyGrl chapter 18 . 6/14/2013
Great chap! Loved it lots. Please update soon
krlsen chapter 18 . 6/14/2013
DeeDee79 chapter 18 . 6/14/2013
Great update! I was worried after Tony's counseling that they wouldn't end up together but I'm glad it looks like they will!
kris.sta chapter 18 . 6/14/2013
Ah! Such an awesome chapter! I love these mind games. Cant wait to see how Justin winds up between the three men in his life.
A.Collins chapter 18 . 6/14/2013
abc chapter 18 . 6/14/2013
i don't understand, was Tony being indifferent on purpose? please clear this in the next update, i really don't understand :/
1986 chapter 18 . 6/14/2013
Don't think the "make him his" will be that easy
Jia chapter 18 . 6/13/2013
Poor Chris.
Zdbjfsaasghjk! I love this work! You're amazing!
semantics chapter 17 . 6/1/2013
Please don't let Justin hate Chris so much :(
semantics chapter 13 . 6/1/2013
I do not know whether I want Justin to end up with Chris or Tony more! Wow. Of course this feels like a Tony/Justin story since they go back way back when, and this is their chance at revenge/forgiveness/redemption. Chris has been with Justin as the supportive friend, albeit his secret agenda... 2 gorgeous guys, who could choose?

The characters are perfect, though not the Barbie-Ken doll perfect. They are all perfect because they have so many issues and flaws like a real person, and it's so easy to get lost in your story because it's like reading the lives of real people. Especially the case with Justin. He is the protagonist, but he is not a clean slate. He was selfish and definitely not a John Doe. Great job. Your writing is wonderful as well, and you build suspension like a horror movie. The tension between Tony and Justin was played out beautifully; I actually felt my heart churn when reading.
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