Reviews for Ventures and Investments |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow Tony what a manipulator you are! Obviously Justin has no idea what he wants from life but it defintely seems like he's clinging to Tony because Tony's there for him. Not sure if I think their relationship is twisted or just messed up. Haha Not that it's a bad thing. |
![]() ![]() Yaay excited for the end! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Psycho Tony is a lot better than Nice Tony lol |
![]() ![]() So glad Justin finally realized what he wanted and went for it (as per Vincent’s sage advice)! In spite of Tony’s scheming, I think these two are perfect for each other! Tony’s so dedicated and Justin deserves to be loved. Thanks so much for the great chapter! Can’t wait to see how this’ll end (but desperately hoping the boys will stay together). Any thoughts on whether you’ll publish this one when finished? |
![]() ![]() ![]() possessive Tony is okay as long as he isn't violent... I mean, if I were Justin, I would have either killed myself already or... Killed myself already. Shit, man. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chap! Loved it lots. Please update soon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great update! I was worried after Tony's counseling that they wouldn't end up together but I'm glad it looks like they will! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! Such an awesome chapter! I love these mind games. Cant wait to see how Justin winds up between the three men in his life. |
![]() ![]() Love. |
![]() ![]() i don't understand, was Tony being indifferent on purpose? please clear this in the next update, i really don't understand :/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't think the "make him his" will be that easy |
![]() ![]() Poor Chris. Zdbjfsaasghjk! I love this work! You're amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please don't let Justin hate Chris so much :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do not know whether I want Justin to end up with Chris or Tony more! Wow. Of course this feels like a Tony/Justin story since they go back way back when, and this is their chance at revenge/forgiveness/redemption. Chris has been with Justin as the supportive friend, albeit his secret agenda... 2 gorgeous guys, who could choose? The characters are perfect, though not the Barbie-Ken doll perfect. They are all perfect because they have so many issues and flaws like a real person, and it's so easy to get lost in your story because it's like reading the lives of real people. Especially the case with Justin. He is the protagonist, but he is not a clean slate. He was selfish and definitely not a John Doe. Great job. Your writing is wonderful as well, and you build suspension like a horror movie. The tension between Tony and Justin was played out beautifully; I actually felt my heart churn when reading. |