Reviews for The Ugly Word
Littlemslulu chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
Christian is such a dream boyfriend!
Preposterous chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Awww! So adorable! I love this oneshot (in case you couldn't already tell).
SwimmingThroughExistance chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
aww:) this was cute... i liked the end too especially because she doesnt say i love you back immediately
Natasha chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Really really liked it:)
Too Much Info chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
I loved it.

So uncliche and very original.

Great work :)

See ya'
TheMoltenWindow chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
Aw sweet. He's so quirky too, I like him :)
x Farii chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
Haha, i like this :D
toffeecakesxox chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
absolute love! :)
SunsetRainbow chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
That was amazing ;D

I loved it
xxcubanangelxx chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
AW... You made me cry! Barely any one can make me cry! :')
Lalaith7 chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
The opening doesn't really transition well or seem to fit in with the rest, I don't know how better to describe it but I think that needs work. I also find it hard to believe any guy would continue to ask a girl out who continues to reject them unless there are deeper psychological issues, esp. in college when there are so many girls to choose from. If I accept your premise though and ignore the disjointed feel of the opening back-story the core of the story is nicely written. Good luck with your creative writing class.
starlightxtears chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
I really like the fact that this story was so honest and direct, not dragging on about the characters' emotions and thoughts. This is one of the most realistic and cliche-free oneshots I've read here in FP in a long time, and I applaud your wonderful writing.
Damned to heaven chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
That was adorable...not overly fluffy. It worked.
thefaultinourpatronus chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
Aww, so cute! Nice concept. Really well done.

balloonfista chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
aww, that was sad but cute :) I liked it :)

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