|Reviews for Baby on Board|
| smoke another grin chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
Powerful. I can feel the emotion, it's so REAL, it hurts. Awesome, but lose the &s, maybe?
| i think that maybe chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
text me whenever you want chick.
(this is ment to be super uncreepy but i'm sure it'll sound wierd as hell anyway (but i'm stoned and am deciding to admit it anyway)- you kind of remind me of me five years ago and part of me wants to like mother hen you and keep you safe and i wish i could jesuszap you into some life where you statistically won't have to deal with all this same bullshit) anyway- i'm a creeper sorry.
this write is genius. (&i like the slang- it adds.)
| Isca chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
"I'm losing my mind and I think I'm pregnant." I love the hysteria here; the speaker knows that she's spiraling out of control but can't seem to stop her world from crashing down.
"And tell him that he's going to be a daddy and that I'm going to kill myself." This is probably my favourite part. I love the angst here; it's impactful.
| 4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
that sounds shitty. you okay?