Reviews for Just Some Threesomes and Thresholds
Nightmare Remedy chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
I think the story would be more enjoyable if you mixed up the paragraph structure a bit. Try not to always start with dialogue.

i.e. Every once in a while, make it more like this:

Sylvie mindlessly twirls a finger around Graham's curly locks. "You still bite your fingernails, and you still get pissed easily. So, there's no way you can be Mister Perfect and still have thoseā€¦ issues," she comments, only looking at him when she says the word "issues".

Though it seems more like part of a longer story than a one-shot, I liked how the characters interacted. It's adorable how loved Sylvie is!
Diogeneszeno chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
Interesting beginning. I feel like Graham is iffy, but I'll have to wait :)