It's great I can't wait to hear the what Iendro's story is and I want to learn more about Janiro!

Update soon please!

I LOVED IT! Poor, poor Iendro! I really liked the cave's descriptions, too. I can't wait to learn Janrios's story! I hope it's not as sad as Iendro's.

Well, now we can see why Iendro left. Those elders are evil!

A very cool and innovative story line. I hope to read more soon.

Wow! This is awesome! I love it! The characters are great, and the story seems really, really promising. I get the feeling Iendro was framed, or accused wrongly, or something like that. That would be so sad :( I hope to read more soon!