|Reviews for Dear Life|
| steffxnie chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
I like how you addressed to life at the start.
'You pull on a mask and smile,
you put on an act and hide,
You think you've fooled the world,
but you've only mocked yourself.'
Great start to the piece.
I like the second stanza too, but not as much for the following stanza. I think you can develop the expressions better. But this piece carries a positive message. Keep writing. :)