Reviews for Dear Life
steffxnie chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
I like how you addressed to life at the start.

'You pull on a mask and smile,

you put on an act and hide,

You think you've fooled the world,

but you've only mocked yourself.'

Great start to the piece.

I like the second stanza too, but not as much for the following stanza. I think you can develop the expressions better. But this piece carries a positive message. Keep writing. :)