Reviews for Bonded |
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![]() ![]() More ease |
![]() ![]() Swooooon and now he wants to introduce her to her in laws hehehe |
![]() ![]() ![]() God, I actually love you so much! I'm very engrossed in the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Game if thrones is back o just read TWO Chaps of BONDED! |
![]() ![]() IMSCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGG OMGGGG NO WORDS |
![]() ![]() ![]() So much cuteness, now kiss! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn GIRL you can WRITE! I held my breath the entirety of the last 3 paragraphs. Gripping! |
![]() ![]() Love it keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() She is pretty oblivious but still |
![]() ![]() WTFFF how could you just leave us hanging like that |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, first things first. I must admit that there are quite a lot of spelling mistakes and so on, especially in the first half of the story, but the narrative itself is very good! I like your story telling and the fictional world! I look forward to the next chapter! A beta or some editing could easily deal with some spelling mistakes after the story is finished. :) |
![]() ![]() hey i like your stories i just finished reading rejected and was going to read betrayed but as this has more chapters i'm going to check it out first |
![]() ![]() I truly hope tarquin means it when he says he won't be swayed by just a pretty face. He's lived in a harem all his life so it's sounds plausible enough. The sisters really get on my nerves. And i really hope they get what's coming to them for treating jza the way they did. Or at least that tarquin somehow finds out. Seeinh as how jza would never let it slip. Being honourable has its fault. I like king Samuels as a whole and I get that the plot needed her to protect her sister but I really don't like that the King Lay that burden on her. Especially for a bunch of people who were so ungrateful and eventually traitors too. Here's hoping our heroine regains her honour and the sisters get exposed |
![]() ![]() Damnn. Look at Tarquinius getting all self righteous on her behalf. |