|Reviews for The Pianist|
| StradiNette chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
I really like this. Not only does it speak to me as a musician, but it is beautifully worded.
| Kader Gwyneth Marque chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
Aw I remember when you showed me this :) a very nice poem, and thank you for writing about me.
| name redacted chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
Interesting punctuation, using sentence structure but without the capitolization. Any reason for this? I like the enjambment in the second satanza ("faster, too fast...). It just has an interesting connotation to it. Also, the third stanza flows particularly well(You pour/your soul/into the music), as does the seventh (You are/one/ with the music). The fifth stanza (with every breath...) doesn't seem to flow quite right. The word "respire" seems misplaced, while the idea is clear. Otherwise, lucid imagery.