|Reviews for thank you, stranger|
| Little girl Big world chapter 7 . 6/25/2010
"indecisive too (but on that, i'm not so sure)" Ha I LOVE this!
This piece is wonderful in all its honesty. Great work
| Little girl Big world chapter 6 . 6/25/2010
"when i counted the hours in cherry pits and the porch swings sung." love this line & the phrase, "a sunburnt daffodil"
your writing is stunning!
| Little girl Big world chapter 5 . 6/25/2010
iv is my favorite, just the way its worded and the attitude behind it.
the final line of this is amazing.
| for shame chapter 6 . 5/29/2010
i can't figure out exactly what this poem means.
but i like the first four lines. sex.
and there's lots of good imagery.
sunburnt daffodils, for example.
(btw, "all in all", not "all i all".)
| Little girl Big world chapter 4 . 5/22/2010
I love how you put a twist onto such a common phrase and gave it its own new meaning. Great work
| Little girl Big world chapter 3 . 5/22/2010
I love the idea of this
| Little girl Big world chapter 2 . 5/22/2010
Oh wow I love the imagery in this,
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
I love this. A good beginning.
"this will only blur the edges of reality and my desires;
but hey, if it's thrills you're looking for...
i've got them hidden in my back pocket."
& P.S. I like your new profile picture :)
I'll be reading this
| Creeping Collarbones chapter 2 . 5/19/2010
I like this. It's sad with really nice imagery. I love the thought of 'dandelion bones'