Aww this was so cute. Like a tsundere writing about his feelings towards someone he likes but will keep denying it in front of everyone or find excuses to justify their actions through logic and rationality rather than confessing their love for you.

That was soooooo cute.

I got diabetes just from this

Lol...:)

Denial at it's finest.

Love it. Makes me wish there was a whole long story about it.

Cute. His denial is just super cute XD

Ahh, denial! I love this so much! It is so cute and I can imagine a guy saying those things :) I loved how accurate his hotness scale thing was - he'd obviously been thinking about it a lot!

Ah, the sweet sound of denial.

Soooooooo cute.
Considering he's in denial, and your writing style is perfect.

I love this story. You're absolutely brilliant. This is the only story that I keep coming back to. Absolute genius. I am doing the "all hail" thing with my arms right now. Great job!

I love the writing style and the guy is being too adorable without meaning to! I kept on laughing. talk about being in denial much? But this happens a lot too!
It was short, but I loved the writing style and the effectiveness which you portrayed at every sentence. It's so direct and clear; and I honestly felt that someone like this was saying that to me in real life. It was that good. Keep up the great work!

haha..
this was too cute! 3

Cool story. Cute and amusing

I don't know what to say about this story. Even though he seems like the kind of guy that I despise, I can't help but smile at him. Maybe inside me, I just know that he will take care of her. I really like the way you wrote this story. I can totally picture a guy saying/thinking all these things.

xoxo,
JustWish