|Reviews for plausible plot development|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
wow so stupid
| greenforests chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
this was quirky in the way you raise your eyebrows at someone who is sneaking glances at you. I like it.
| the sun softly smiles chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
I'm not sure, either; but it's cheeky and I like it. particularly the "co / hesive" for some reason or another.
| nevermore199 chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
This is beautiful. And it sounds so much like you.
| i think that maybe chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
pft. yeah, it's official-
you're friggin amazing.
you are like everything i love and love to hate if that makes any sense.
"you want" period. break. "flow."
complete bitch-assness. that's all this can be summed to. i smiled hardcore.
twist your eyebrows line was beautiful and unique and just soveryyou.
fav lines i've read on fp since i've been back. hands down.
i don't think it's coming across cohesively (ironic enough) but this kinda made my day so far. (i'm not sure either, but i'm fucking psyched that you're back.)