Reviews for Breakaway
BentoBEAN chapter 5 . 9/4/2011
This is a great story too:) plez keep on writing!
smileinthemira chapter 5 . 3/24/2011
I enjoy this update soon :D
aby pwn u chapter 5 . 10/17/2010
Still waiting for the romance to start! XD CONTINUE! Ur writing is really professional and I love it! but I doubt the plots really started yet
Dani Blade chapter 5 . 10/5/2010
awesome!
Gilly Bean2 chapter 4 . 9/27/2010
Very interesting story so far. Of course, there are things that have not been taken into account. Like, in order to have a job, Riley would have to provide a social security number because of taxes, and that would be linked to her name (so a: that would expose her location and b: she couldn't use a false name). Or that if she used the stolen credit card or her debit card, that could be tracked. Or that, in order to get the records from her old school she would have to reveal her whereabouts. Anyway, I am interested to see where you go next with this, and I hope you use some of the things I have pointed out to make the story better! Keep up the writing! Cheers!

Gillian
xXPanic.Is.My.PassionXx chapter 3 . 7/17/2010
Very interesting story so far. I would love to see it continue.
aby pwn u chapter 3 . 6/25/2010
Yay! She found a place to stay :):):)
aby pwn u chapter 2 . 6/21/2010
She should have asked them for money so she could pack for moving away for the well:D dusnt hurt havin more money around ya;) OH! I wonder whats happening next :O!LOVING IT!
x.x buk wurm x.x chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
great story and chapter