Reviews for The Exploration of the Male Anatomy
natmarie chapter 36 . 6/10/2011
Sigh, I can't believe this is over. I just read the last two chapters in one go.

Some of the pacing seems a little rushed, and Cass and Adrian seemed to be fighting a lot. And not all of it was some cutesy stuff. There was a lot of angers and mood shifts, but that is to be expected I suppose. You also did a lot of explaining the character's actions. Whether by description or in their own dialogue. This happens a lot in epilogues, so everything seems tied up in the end.

That said, I really did love this. You kept your characters pretty consistant. I like the believablity of going to the brother's graduation. I like that Jase and Nina got together, finally, though her intense question session about his feelings for Cass was a little much. That is the only thing that made them getting together seem "fast". Adrian is funny and loveable, I don't know how Cass held out so long. I can't believe they left in the middle of lunch. But It works. Nice way to wrap everything up. :)
Devilish Kisses chapter 36 . 6/10/2011
Aww, I loved it :)
witeaya chapter 36 . 6/10/2011
the ending fit both adrian's and cassidy's characters.

never expect u'll make cassidy withheld sex from the perv. adrian had become a sweet perv. oh, how i love his character.

this is a great story and i had so much fun reading it. one of the thing ilike themost is how well ur character development is.

good job and pls write more in the future.

and some oneshots about this couple will be wonderful...
Jude Blake Gabriel chapter 36 . 6/10/2011
I loved it...sigh...Adrian is such a hot idiot. :)
Kiss The Stars With Me chapter 36 . 6/10/2011
this epilogue was awesome! great job on this story! It was amazing :)
strangledice chapter 36 . 6/10/2011
Great ending. I really love EMA and I'm sad that it has ended already. I'll be waiting for you next story! Good Luck!
Jevanminx chapter 36 . 6/10/2011
It has been absolutely amazing to read this story. A brilliant ending, though I am sad to see it go, I am glad Nina and Jase are together and Cass is just brill in this.

JM
The Imagination Addict chapter 36 . 6/10/2011
AMAZING! i LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. i've enjoyed it SO MUCH n i feel like crying now it's over... okay, no, im not actually tearing. but im so happy to see them finally get together and well... him confess to her! (sorry i didn't read the last chpt till the epilogue came.) n i really like how u wrote the bit about them having sex. short, implicit, and the unique use of the word "encore". classy. n how you write adrian's thoughts... i think it's amazing. they may not be exactly how guys think (im a noob when it comes to guys) but it DEFINITELY isn't too reminiscent of girls. n it's very realistic how he just got frustrated without sex but eventually decided he DOES love her and will be celibate for her. very well written.
NeverHeardOfYou chapter 36 . 6/10/2011
Naaawwwww... It's finished! It's so good! I love if to bits! :D 3
ghurl00 chapter 36 . 6/10/2011
That was a cute ending. I'm so happy that Nina and Jace got together. Finally. :). Adrian is so cute. Hehe. Him and Cassidy just work so well.
GermanSam chapter 36 . 6/10/2011
I loved it! I loved every minute of it. It was so great and entertaining. This story was easily one of my favorites and I'm so glad I found it on this site.

You are such a talented writer and I will definitely have you on Author Alert! I can't wait to see what more you come up with.

I was really glad that this story didn't end picture perfect. Cassidy and Adrian are still Cassidy and Adrian! It was so great. I loved his little proclaimation of love. It was sweet especailly with the 'bad' timing.

This was such an amazing story. (I know I've said that many times and I will probably continue to) I am going to miss getting the updates for this story as I know many other people will too.

Congratulations on your success with this story! I wish you much luck in the future.

Thank you for this amazing, awesome, perfect, fabulous, wonderful story! It shall never be forgotten in my mind. I love it so much! :)
debzxxx chapter 36 . 6/10/2011
yay :) great epilogue, i love how you made it quite realistic! a couple tense slip ups, but otherwise nicely written :)

can't wait to see what you write next! great work :)
pbgurl chapter 36 . 6/10/2011
:( oh no! I've been dreading the day this would be updated becuase then it would really mean the story is over. I'm so sad it's over. I don't want it to end. *cries* no more Adrian! :(

Onto the ending...I loved it! I like that you didn't make them have a perfect relationship and that they fought and had Cassidy make him hold out on sex for a while. I even liked how Adrian said he loves her during the lunch lol!

lol! Cheers for Terry putting Jase and Adrian in their place.

-Liz :D

Seriously though I'm already missing this story.

A lot! :'(

ugh I'm going to have Adrian withdrawls
Northfacegr95 chapter 36 . 6/10/2011
LMFAO! totally love it! Adrian just act like a little virgin all the time and she'll be chasing after you
VanillaSnowdrops chapter 36 . 6/9/2011
Yayyyy! That was an awesome ending! Will there be some sort of sequel? I hope so~!
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