|Reviews for The Lone Self|
| Wasted Days chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
Very expressive. They rhythm and the rhythm rhyme was excellently done.
The first two lines where my favorite.
| Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
i thought you quit rhyming :P not possible to stay away, right?
the first two lines felt very lonely for some reason. the imagery was dark (colored lights was translated in my mind as fireworks in a dark sky) and empty in a way.
nice phrases at the end!
" Vibrance of the colored lights,
beauty of the silent night"