Reviews for The Lone Self
Wasted Days chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
Very expressive. They rhythm and the rhythm rhyme was excellently done.

The first two lines where my favorite.
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
i thought you quit rhyming :P not possible to stay away, right?

the first two lines felt very lonely for some reason. the imagery was dark (colored lights was translated in my mind as fireworks in a dark sky) and empty in a way.

nice phrases at the end!

fave lines:

" Vibrance of the colored lights,

beauty of the silent night"