Reviews for French Kisses
Lina chapter 1 . 4/12/2017
This story was bittersweet.. He shouldn't have forgiven her so easily, but at the same time I'm glad he got his happy ending.. He deserved it, but she? not so much.. Because if she loved him like he loved her, she wouldn't even think about going with her best friend..
Guest chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
Okay, seriously great story but horribly annoying yet great heroine for testing in the way she did. Will she ever know that those jerk things were set up by the best friend?
Gyp chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
He must really love her to run after her! If i was JERK i would do the opposite of what he did, let her regret the decision she made and i wouldn't forgive her easily.

Oh man, he's one lovable jerk! 3
Lady Crane chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
This seriously needs more reviews because of its awesomeness. Way to go, jerk-I mean, Harvey!
HarderToBreathe chapter 1 . 4/10/2012
This was just EXCELLENT! I loved everything about it. The romance was just right and that Derek guy was such a fool for trying to break them up. Eleanor French 3 Harvey Morris

For a Physics/Math major, you give a fresh perspective in writing that's analytical compared with other story concepts. Keep up the great job! :D
Alanisaur chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
If i was that guy i would be like, "Fuck it, let her regret her decision. I wont put myself out there when shes the one that gave me up."
Amber chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
For once The Jerk finally gets the girl!
Penpaperaser chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
Original, well-written and fluffily enjoyable. What more can I say? :)
LanternLight13 chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
I love the originality, this is great. Thanks for sharing.
strangledice chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
I love it. This is so beautiful.

Great job!
bubublacz chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
First, I was intrigued with your synopsis that I said I had to read it coz somehow POV's from guys always make me

laugh and rooting for them. It was humourous. I really liked the story. I loved how you showed bits of their past

to truly show a complete picture of their relationship. It is true the thing about the movies what with the BF and

the jerk and yeah. It was a new and interesting perspective that it kept me wanting to know what will happen next

and blah blah blah. Damn! I'm so insanely jealous of Eleanor not that I would love having to guys fight over me

but because of Harvey.

But wait one thing, what do you mean by her looks of pity to him? I hope you could reply.
reindrops chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
I really felt bad for Harvey. But hey, I'm glad they ended up together.
elma chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
your grammar isn't perfect but it isn't distractingly bad so I suppose I can forgive that :) You have these huge monolith paragraphs with no breaks in it that and quite frankly, seem daunting to read but when I find myself reading it I realize it isn't boring and quite easy to follow. I loved the whole French Kissed theme you had going there and how he outsmarted the best friend jerk. so all in all, i enjoyed this story! great job! :)
witeaya chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
first and foremost, derek is a huge !

that taken care of, i have to say i love ur twist in this normally cliche story.

i want my own harvey(the man, not the bike)

i know he loves her and everything but why did he want her back? bcause of the look? man, she left you at the only came back running cause the other man was not up to her expectation as she imagined. if derek done everything up to her taste, she will be with him, not .

i kinda get how they were feeling but she acted like a and that's why im this bitter.

i love ur story even when im swearing elle to the nines. it's just something i love to hate or is it hate to love?

IridescentMonkee chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
Awesome story ;)
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