|Reviews for Orcus Beach|
| Cammie Cassia Chase chapter 18 . 9/7/2012
| Viol8 chapter 18 . 8/9/2010
Kyah! This is so... sweet... and perfect. ) Haha... I kind of want a sequel. But oh well, might as well read something new too right? X) Good job, btw. :D
| ByYourSide chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
What a cute opening! Will Amethyst get together with the jerk from the restaurant? Seems like that happens in stories like these.
I love cute little romances. Love at the beach. Seriously, what could be more fun? I like it a lot. :) And the little babies are adorable.
This was a really fun opening. It leaves me wondering what will happen next, and I get the feeling that will be really fun too.
| Eternal Skies chapter 18 . 5/27/2010
:( too fast
| Eternal Skies chapter 16 . 5/27/2010
don't tell this is the END! come on! *groans*
| Eternal Skies chapter 15 . 5/27/2010
i have no comment so i'll simply move on, i can't wait
| Eternal Skies chapter 14 . 5/27/2010
the usual drama/misunderstanding -_-
| Eternal Skies chapter 13 . 5/27/2010
AH! IF I HEARD ZAC SAY 'UNCOOL/NOT SO COOL' ONE MORE TIME, I'LL KILL HIM IN MY HEAD!
he doesn't sound the way he's supposed to sound. he's 17 or something, but he sounds like he's 13 and he's having his first love (it is his first love in a way, but you know what i mean. as in, he's not experienced in dating)
amy sounds fine though
| Eternal Skies chapter 12 . 5/27/2010
i wish you've written about the talk they had through dinner, instead of just skipping it
| Eternal Skies chapter 11 . 5/27/2010
let's see what's gonna happen *sigh* i want to get my fight!
| Eternal Skies chapter 10 . 5/27/2010
almost right! zac didn't see kent but kent said he liked amy (though i was a bit disappointed and bored. what the heck, the guy says i like you...okay? and she just blushes and then that's it. nothing more. i hope when zac tells her how he feels, there'd be more drama and heart throwing up)
so, kent's only interested in her because she almost exactly looks like a girl he once loved? aha, that's new
| Eternal Skies chapter 9 . 5/27/2010
ohh, i can guess at the next chapter and i'm known as a pretty good guesser/plot ruiner...so:
kent's gonna finally have the balls to tell amy that he likes her and zac's going to die from jelousy when he sees her with kent so much that he doesn't take it anymore and causes a fight with kent
| Eternal Skies chapter 8 . 5/27/2010
aw, a blushing man is so adorable!
| Eternal Skies chapter 7 . 5/27/2010
| Eternal Skies chapter 6 . 5/27/2010