Reviews for Orcus Beach |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love it. -Cam |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kyah! This is so... sweet... and perfect. ) Haha... I kind of want a sequel. But oh well, might as well read something new too right? X) Good job, btw. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a cute opening! Will Amethyst get together with the jerk from the restaurant? Seems like that happens in stories like these. I love cute little romances. Love at the beach. Seriously, what could be more fun? I like it a lot. :) And the little babies are adorable. This was a really fun opening. It leaves me wondering what will happen next, and I get the feeling that will be really fun too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :( too fast |
![]() ![]() ![]() don't tell this is the END! come on! *groans* |
![]() ![]() ![]() i have no comment so i'll simply move on, i can't wait |
![]() ![]() ![]() the usual drama/misunderstanding -_- |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH! IF I HEARD ZAC SAY 'UNCOOL/NOT SO COOL' ONE MORE TIME, I'LL KILL HIM IN MY HEAD! he doesn't sound the way he's supposed to sound. he's 17 or something, but he sounds like he's 13 and he's having his first love (it is his first love in a way, but you know what i mean. as in, he's not experienced in dating) amy sounds fine though |
![]() ![]() ![]() i wish you've written about the talk they had through dinner, instead of just skipping it |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay... let's see what's gonna happen *sigh* i want to get my fight! |
![]() ![]() ![]() almost right! zac didn't see kent but kent said he liked amy (though i was a bit disappointed and bored. what the heck, the guy says i like you...okay? and she just blushes and then that's it. nothing more. i hope when zac tells her how he feels, there'd be more drama and heart throwing up) so, kent's only interested in her because she almost exactly looks like a girl he once loved? aha, that's new |
![]() ![]() ![]() ohh, i can guess at the next chapter and i'm known as a pretty good guesser/plot ruiner...so: kent's gonna finally have the balls to tell amy that he likes her and zac's going to die from jelousy when he sees her with kent so much that he doesn't take it anymore and causes a fight with kent |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, a blushing man is so adorable! |
![]() ![]() ![]() :P smug |
![]() ![]() ![]() ! heh! |