Reviews for Our Midnight Holiday |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT SO MUCH PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE AMAZING STORY |
![]() ![]() ![]() lawlz!njoying dis store! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha! i really like the friendly banter that u put in each chapter. i really like the characters development, but i liked it better when Alexis was a plain-jane. it gives hope...even fantasy hope...to those whose who are not short of gorgous. anyways, i checked out ur other story b4 this 1 and i rlly like ur style of writing and i definately can not wait til i read more.. btw, every friday updates are failing...aren't they? |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehe, he's cute! update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi just stumbled across your story and i love it! I think that in both chapters the characters are coming across well. i would just like to suggest not to let the story fall too much into any cliches as most chistmas based stories tend to go,try to keep it a bit different also i think some verbal back and forth between them should be a good touch to the story. Other than that I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter so good luck :D |
![]() ![]() hahaha lols. So funny! Update really soon? Please? :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh cool! funny even... update quickly! |
![]() ![]() I am extremely intrigued. Can't wait to find out what happens. Update soon. |