Reviews for Forsaken
Isca chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
I like the subtle flesh/breath internal rhyming in the beginning - it definitely adds to the flow of the piece.

"Its all I know." It's.

"You are my Mary Magdalene." An intriguing line.
Dragons Willow chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
DUDE! this freakin' rox mine sox! i luv this whole thing! it ebbs and flows, tells a story. it feels light in reading it but the words speak of something darker. i luv how you messed with my thinking and many stars and kudos(i wish they still sold those) for this one my friend! and i shall sign in just to fave it! w