|Reviews for Fiance'|
| static shakedown chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
That's nice. I like the "stolen taste of the wedding cake" line. The last line feels really awkwardly phrased, though. I'm not sure what it is exactly. Maybe the use of "barely"? Not sure. Keep writing! :)
| Punslinger chapter 1 . 5/21/2010
That's sweet. (Excuse the double-entendre) Although many modern couples "can't barely wait"-or don't choose to-it's nice to think that some can make the moment more delicious by curbing their appetites.