|Reviews for Looking for Ethan|
| Charissa Mariah chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
I thought this was a great beginning to a story with a great introduction. Some of your sentences were incomplete and there were a few typos with your words, but overall a nice piece. I think there should be a little more description like what happened during those three days of her ride and maybe a little more interaction between her and her aunt harriet and slave friend lilly, but just throwing some suggestions at you!I have recently added a piece called prayer and would appreiate it if you could review it. Its just the first chapter of many to come, but I'm really looking for some feedback. Thanks a lot!