Reviews for Cinnamon and Hip Bones
Isca chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
"Immortality sounds like trees." Mind-blowing.
nickyO chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
My intepretation: is immortality like a desire to personificate the nature world, see what we want to see or is it more like a lingering tingling feeling of something consumed. Am I close to the original thought?

If not, still great poem, fun to interpret.
Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
This is pretty cool :) I like it, great job.
recycle rhymes chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
this really makes me think of michael ondaatje's "the cinammon peeler" (that's a high compliment, he's a profilic Canadian poet) the way you used the scent was poignant. leaves the the taste in the reader's mouth.
YasuRan chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
Delicious and intriguing!
Creeping Collarbones chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
You write wonderful haikus. I love this one.