Reviews for Steel Branch
Kyre Crow chapter 1 . 6/10/2010
So simple, so much pain. No one tells artists those things.

So much pain.
in theory chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
Haha so true, and even if they did, we wouldn't listen. I have missed your work!

DiaRose chapter 1 . 5/29/2010
As someone who has been feeling quite rusty, I feel very inspired by this. Reading just a few pieces of your work has made my mind open up a little, I really appreciate it.


Isca chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
Brilliant. The alliteration of "roots rust" is lovely. What I love most about this haiku, however, is the post-modern vibe it has: the tree is now 'mechanical.' Mind-blowing piece, really.
nickyO chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
I love the slight rhyme and the pithy summed up thought. My interpretation is that sometimes form and style aren't enough to carry the writer through an uninspiring time.
Ayx chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
You construct the image for the reader to go to so easily. Wonderful work and you're right...

No one tells the artists these things.

Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
This is pretty cool, I like it. :)
recycle rhymes chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
i like the air of mystery. short, but it says a lot.